Gordon B. Coyle

Joined November 2021
We've got a team putting together what I (think) is great content for our organization, but I'd welcome some feedback? This is our first serious (we did some soft funny videos first) video we created. We've actually created a pretty full pipeline (I think there are 15-20 video projects underway), but I'd love some non-geek (we're in the IT services world) feedback if possible:

https://youtu.be/2B8FihhT6gM

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Gordon B. Coyle
Love it.  Great mix of information, personality and a little humor.  My only suggestion is to move your teleprompter or scripting higher towards the camera (if you're using them) so that you're looking more into the camera.  But, great job!