Raw Bio Video is Finished! This is 1st Draft.
Posted July 19, 2021
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1. You started and own your own business, I'd love to know more about why this industry was something you were passionate about because at the end of the day, I want to learn more about what it may be like working with you. You mention your passions for helping others, dive into that and how you felt you could do more to support people in different industries.
2. At the end, I'd love to see something actionable like "I can't wait to chat with you soon". Doesn't have to be that specifically, but the idea being that they leave with a next step.
I would also like to add or say, I just can't help but be so passionate about my dream, it means everything to me. Especially since I have been in business for 10 years but still at ground zero but I will not give up.
There is nothing I can do about the lighting in my room, because I am in the living room and the lighting coming from the lamps on the ceiling is very poor. And I was using a cheap vlog kit broke. This is why I prefer to do it the right way, and hire a videographer. I was using my cellphone.
As far as the hat.
I will try to come up with a strong CTA, but that is something I can't figure out, without doing a survey.
I am just being honest not rude